英语书信修改.Excuse me for my delay in answering your letter,because I have prepared my final exam last week,in fact,to become an excellent radio announcer is my life goal ,ever since junior high school .I have dream about that I’d like to tr

英语书信修改.Excuse me for my delay in answering your letter,because I have prepared my final exam last week,in fact,to become an excellent radio announcer is my life goal ,ever since junior high school .I have dream about that I’d like to tr
英语书信修改.
Excuse me for my delay in answering your letter,because I have prepared my final exam last week,in fact,to become an excellent radio announcer is my life goal ,ever since junior high school .I have dream about that
I’d like to travel around the world and write something about my journey ——that’s what I’d do if I had enough money ,I won’t it only a dream ,I hope it’s come true ,so I need to study hard to get more knowledge .
One of my favorites book is "Walden" by Henry D Thoreau.Have you ever read about it?Actually I didn’t like to read popular magazines and comic very much,I most like those books which have Brilliant thoughts and deep insight.how about you?
看看有什么表达不合理的地方，谢谢了^-^

英语书信修改.Excuse me for my delay in answering your letter,because I have prepared my final exam last week,in fact,to become an excellent radio announcer is my life goal ,ever since junior high school .I have dream about that I’d like to tr
I am sorry for my declining to reply your letter,because i was busy with preparing fina exam last week.
Becoming to an excellent radio announcer is my life goal,so i need to prepare from high school.I dream that one day i can travel around the world and write something as journey to record after i have enough money.It is a dream deserving to phase in all life.
The third paragraph is ok.
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because I have prepared my final exam last week上周用过去时，把have去掉
, in fact, to become an excellent radio announcer is my life goal ,这是一句完整句子，前后都用句号
ever since junior high school到底是初中还是高中，选择一个

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because I have prepared my final exam last week上周用过去时，把have去掉
, in fact, to become an excellent radio announcer is my life goal ,这是一句完整句子，前后都用句号
ever since junior high school到底是初中还是高中，选择一个
.I have dream about that用完成时dream改成dreamed，最后用句号
I won’t it only a dream这句不知道你想表达什么
I hope it’s come true改成I hope it will come true
favorites去掉s
Actually I didn’t like 如果是过去不喜欢，合理，否则把didn't改成don't

其他都挺好~

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because I have prepared my final exam last week应该用过去时，have prepared 改成 prepared 。
ever since junior high school 句子不完整，缺少主语。这句话这样说或许会好点：It has been the aim of my life to become an excellent radio ...

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because I have prepared my final exam last week应该用过去时，have prepared 改成 prepared 。
ever since junior high school 句子不完整，缺少主语。这句话这样说或许会好点：It has been the aim of my life to become an excellent radio announcer since I went to junior high school .
that’s what I’d do中I’d代表什么？应该是I’d like to do 吧
I won’t it only a dream 改成 I don't want it just only a dream
I hope it’s come true 改成,I hope it could come true
favorites 是形容词，去掉s
I most like 改成 I prefer会更好些
how about you？首字母大写

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格式错误 不必要空格开头时候 第二段空格了
可以顶格 另一端空一行
EXCUSE ME 比较口语吧 你书写可以换成另外的最简单的也是最好的 用I'm so sorry之类的
"Walden"书 可以用斜切表示
I most like 你是要说我比较喜欢吗？可以换成 I prefer 之类的
I'm sorry now to reply to your le...

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格式错误 不必要空格开头时候 第二段空格了
可以顶格 另一端空一行
EXCUSE ME 比较口语吧 你书写可以换成另外的最简单的也是最好的 用I'm so sorry之类的
"Walden"书 可以用斜切表示
I most like 你是要说我比较喜欢吗？可以换成 I prefer 之类的
I'm sorry now to reply to your letter because I had prepared my final exam last week.
错了好多

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