帮我查看下我写的英语作文有什么问题吗?哪儿有问题,怎么改?我在1月6日今天晚上就要要!My hobby　　Two years ago,I didn't like music.It should be said is not like it very much.I had plenty of time,but I spent lots of t

帮我查看下我写的英语作文有什么问题吗?哪儿有问题,怎么改?我在1月6日今天晚上就要要!My hobby　　Two years ago,I didn't like music.It should be said is not like it very much.I had plenty of time,but I spent lots of t
帮我查看下我写的英语作文有什么问题吗?哪儿有问题,怎么改?我在1月6日今天晚上就要要!
My hobby
　　Two years ago,I didn't like music.It should be said is not like it very much.
I had plenty of time,but I spent lots of time on playing with computers.When I was very young,I didn't think listening to music was interesting,because I found nothing more interesting than the computer games.
But I've changed now.I enjoy music very much.Mainly is the classical music.
Music is sometimes called a universal language.A composer who cannot speak a single word of our language can make us feel joy and pride,exaltation and despair,peace and mystery through his music.Hope everybody can and I share the classical music
其实我很想把悬赏分给大家，但是没办法，他给我的帮助多一些，所以我给他了，抱歉

帮我查看下我写的英语作文有什么问题吗?哪儿有问题,怎么改?我在1月6日今天晚上就要要!My hobby　　Two years ago,I didn't like music.It should be said is not like it very much.I had plenty of time,but I spent lots of t
You should correct the following sentences like this:
It should be said.______I should say I didn't like it very much.
playing with computers---------playing computers
the computer games------computer games
Mainly.--------- ,especially classical music.
Hope.-------- I hope everybody can share the happiness of listening to classical music.

我认为最后一句Hope everybody can and I share the classical music
可以改成I hope I can share the classic music with everybody.
playing with computers改成playing computers
Mainly可以换成especially。
It s...

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我认为最后一句Hope everybody can and I share the classical music
可以改成I hope I can share the classic music with everybody.
playing with computers改成playing computers
Mainly可以换成especially。
It should be said is not like it very much.
这句最好不要加了。
以上就是我的见解。。
请问一下，这句没看明白什么意思。A composer who cannot speak a single word of our language can make us feel joy and pride, exaltation and despair, peace and mystery through his music
感觉你写的很好啊！呵呵！

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My hobby
　　Two years ago, I didn't like music. It should be said that i did not like it very much.
I had plenty of time, but I spent lots of time on playing computer. When I was very young, I ...

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My hobby
　　Two years ago, I didn't like music. It should be said that i did not like it very much.
I had plenty of time, but I spent lots of time on playing computer. When I was very young, I didn't think listening to music was interesting, because I found nothing more interesting than the computer games.
But I enjoy music very much now,especially the classical music.
Music is sometimes called a universal language. A composer who cannot speak a single word of our language can make us feel joy and pride, exaltation and despair, peace and mystery through his music.Hope everybody can share the classical music with me.

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