帮忙看看错了哪儿There is Fuzhou ,It's in summer ,so very hot .But in the evening ,it's very cool .Lost of people are go out .They wear T-shirts or Beautiful skirts .Some young people are go shopping ,It's interesting .Some are talking with

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帮忙看看错了哪儿There is Fuzhou ,It's in summer ,so very hot .But in the evening ,it's very cool .Lost of people are go out .They wear   T-shirts or Beautiful skirts .Some young people are go shopping ,It's interesting .Some are talking with

帮忙看看错了哪儿There is Fuzhou ,It's in summer ,so very hot .But in the evening ,it's very cool .Lost of people are go out .They wear T-shirts or Beautiful skirts .Some young people are go shopping ,It's interesting .Some are talking with
帮忙看看错了哪儿
There is Fuzhou ,It's in summer ,so very hot .But in the evening ,it's very cool .Lost of people are go out .They wear T-shirts or Beautiful skirts .Some young people are go shopping ,It's interesting .Some are talking with the others . And the old people like going for a walk in the park .They're relax .The children also play have great fun.
Every one have a good time.
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帮忙看看错了哪儿There is Fuzhou ,It's in summer ,so very hot .But in the evening ,it's very cool .Lost of people are go out .They wear T-shirts or Beautiful skirts .Some young people are go shopping ,It's interesting .Some are talking with
(第三句)so it's very hot
(第六句)Lots of people go out
(第八句)Some young people go shopping
(第九句)Some talk with others (时态一致)
(第十二句)They're relaxed
(第十三句)The children also have a great fun