作业帮英语短文帮我找错,这牛逼的学生竟然用英语写报告册I will strictly observe the school discipline,have astrong collective sense of honor,helpful,concemed about the students,getalongwith classmates fusion; study hard,active thinking.
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英语短文帮我找错,这牛逼的学生竟然用英语写报告册I will strictly observe the school discipline,have astrong collective sense of honor,helpful,concemed about the students,getalongwith classmates fusion; study hard,active thinking.
英语短文帮我找错,这牛逼的学生竟然用英语写报告册
I will strictly observe the school discipline,have astrong collective sense of honor,helpful,concemed about the students,getalongwith classmates fusion; study hard,active thinking.
I am a honest,sincere,sensible obedinet,honest and plain student.Leaming thoughvery hard,but leaming method is not the best.So the future is not ideal.
这是我妈的学生用英语写的报告册的自我鉴定,我妈叫我挖到他的错误,有的写错的地方已经改正,这是我改完的.我是初一的,有些改不到很正常,请原谅.
英语短文帮我找错,这牛逼的学生竟然用英语写报告册I will strictly observe the school discipline,have astrong collective sense of honor,helpful,concemed about the students,getalongwith classmates fusion; study hard,active thinking.
observe放在这不太合理,建议换成comply with（遵守规章制度用）；helpful,concemed（换成concerned）并且需在这两个词前加上be动词；get along with classmates fusion建议不用加fusion；active thinking换成 think actively；I am a honest,sincere,sensible obedinet,honest and plain student最后的honest 和plain可以去掉；.Leaming though very hard, but leaming method is not the best. So the future is not ideal 改成 Although I learned very hard, the results and future come not so satisfied to me owing to the defective learning methods.