谁帮我看一下这篇英语短文有没有语病?New Year once again going to come, I am very happy because I will be a long one years old. 14 years old, or an unknown world, must also be full of ups and downs. However, I really look forward to th

谁帮我看一下这篇英语短文有没有语病?New Year once again going to come, I am very happy because I will be a long one years old. 14 years old, or an unknown world, must also be full of ups and downs. However, I really look forward to th
谁帮我看一下这篇英语短文有没有语病?
New Year once again going to come, I am very happy because I will be a long one years old. 14 years old, or an unknown world, must also be full of ups and downs. However, I really look forward to the advent of the new year !
我很着急的~~~~
1、New Year once will arrival , I are very joyful, because of I will grow one-year-old. 14-year-old, be still a unknown world, definitely is also to have been full of joys and sorrows of life. However, I be fond of expecting the New Year approaching!
2、New Year once again going to come, I am very happy because I will be a long one years old. 14 years old, or an unknown world, must also be full of ups and downs. However, I really look forward to the advent of the new year ah!
3、New Year's coming again, I am very happy, because I will long age. 14 years old, or an unknown world, certainly also full of frustrations. However, I expect the coming New Year!
那么，这几篇短文那个是对的呢？

谁帮我看一下这篇英语短文有没有语病?New Year once again going to come, I am very happy because I will be a long one years old. 14 years old, or an unknown world, must also be full of ups and downs. However, I really look forward to th
New Year comes again in an blink of an eye,I am very happy because I am going to be one year elder.14 years old,or an unknown world,also must be full of ups and downs.However,I really look forward of the new year !
错的有点多~有些大改动~

很多地方都错了，我都看不出来你想说什么。

错误真的很多。根据猜测帮你修改一下吧。
A new year is coming again .I am very happy because I will be one year elder ,14 years old .An unknown world is waiting for me ,there will be successes and failures ,however ,i really look forward to the adventure of the new year.

很多地方都错了，我无能为力！