我要给个德国人发电子邮件,邮件大家帮忙检查下别出什么错误,不染的话很丢中国人的脸的!Dear Johannes:How are you?How time feies I haven't seen you for long time.I'm Wolfboy,your new Chinese friend!Do you still remembe

我要给个德国人发电子邮件,邮件大家帮忙检查下别出什么错误,不染的话很丢中国人的脸的!Dear Johannes:How are you?How time feies I haven't seen you for long time.I'm Wolfboy,your new Chinese friend!Do you still remembe
我要给个德国人发电子邮件,邮件大家帮忙检查下别出什么错误,不染的话很丢中国人的脸的!
Dear Johannes:
How are you?How time feies I haven't seen you for long time.I'm Wolfboy,your new Chinese friend!Do you still remember me I think you maybe enjoyed yourself in China!Have you seen pandas in Chengdu?I think panda is cute and smart.At the moment,I still don't know where your hometown is,Germany?Or France?What is Harry Potter's e-mail adress?I want to send e-mail to him!
Would you mind helping me to buy some Germany delisious food and then send to me?I'll pay for you the all money and some wages!(Smiling.)
I hope you make a lots of money in the future!Could you take my best wishes to your family?Thanks!
Write to me soon.
your Chinese friend
Wolfboy
我刚上完初二````英语还行``呵呵~

我要给个德国人发电子邮件,邮件大家帮忙检查下别出什么错误,不染的话很丢中国人的脸的!Dear Johannes:How are you?How time feies I haven't seen you for long time.I'm Wolfboy,your new Chinese friend!Do you still remembe
Dear Johannes:
How are you?
How time flies!I haven't seen you for a long time!I'm Wolfboy,your new Chinese friend.Don't you still remember me?I think you must have enjoyed yourself in China!Have you seen pandas in Chengdu?I think pandas are cute and smart.By the way,I still don't know where your hometown is,Germany?Or France?What is Harry Potter's e-mail adress?I want to send e-mail to him!
Would you mind helping me to buy some delicious Germany food and then send to me?I'll pay for you the all money and some wages!(Smiling.)
I hope you make a lot of money in the future!Could you take my best wishes to your family?Thanks!
Write to me soon.
your Chinese friend
Wolfboy

How time flies!
I haven't seen you for a long time!

如果他不是英语国家人就还好。呵呵
真的比较不怎么样，不过他能懂的

根据语言习惯大概改了一下...这里没法改字体颜色, 所以lz凑合看下.
Dear Johannes:
Hope you're doing well :)
How time flies, I haven't seen you for a long time. I'm Wolfboy, your new Chinese friend! Do you still rememb...

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根据语言习惯大概改了一下...这里没法改字体颜色, 所以lz凑合看下.
Dear Johannes:
Hope you're doing well :)
How time flies, I haven't seen you for a long time. I'm Wolfboy, your new Chinese friend! Do you still remember me?
I hope enjoyed yourself in China!Have you seen pandas in Chengdu? I think panda is cute and smart. At the moment,I still don't know where your hometown is, Germany? Or France?
would you pls let me know Harry Potter's e-mail? I'd like to send him an email.
Can I pls ask you to do me a favor to buy some delisious Germany food and then send to me? I'll pay for it myself of course :P

I wish you a wonderful life in the future. and pls bring my best regards to the family.

Looking forward to hear from you soon.

your Chinese friend
Wolfboy
另外提醒lz注意格式和语言习惯, 比如不要用太多的感叹号, 每个标点后面要有空格, 段落间也要留一行间隔...我适当做了修改...

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Dear Johannes:
Hope you're doing well :)
How time flies, I haven't seen you for a long time. I'm Wolfboy, your new Chinese friend! Do you still remember me?
I hope enjoyed yourself in C...

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Dear Johannes:
Hope you're doing well :)
How time flies, I haven't seen you for a long time. I'm Wolfboy, your new Chinese friend! Do you still remember me?
I hope enjoyed yourself in China!Have you seen pandas in Chengdu? I think panda is cute and smart. At the moment,I still don't know where your hometown is, Germany? Or France?
would you pls let me know Harry Potter's e-mail? I'd like to send him an email.
Can I pls ask you to do me a favor to buy some delisious Germany food and then send to me? I'll pay for it myself of course :P
I wish you a wonderful life in the future. and pls bring my best regards to the family.
Looking forward to hear from you soon.
your Chinese friend
Wolfboy

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