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Comparative study of animal help to show how man's space require are influenced in his environment.In animals we can observing the direction,the rate,and the extent of changes of behavior that follow changes in space available to them as we can never hope to do in men.For one thing,by using animals it am possible to acelerate time,since animal generations is relatively short.Scientist can,at forty years,observe four hundred forty generations of mice,while has in the same span of time seen only two generations of his own kind.And,off course,he can be more detatched about the fate of animal.

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Comparative study of animals helps to show how man's space requirements are influenced in his environment.With animals we can observe the direction,the rate,and the extent of changes of behaviors that follow changes in space available to them which we can never hope to do with men.For one thing,by using animals it is possible to acelerate the progress of study,since animal generations are relatively short.Scientist can,in forty years,observe four hundred and forty generations of mice,while man has in the same span of time seen only two generations of his own kind.And,of course,he can be more detatched about the fate of animal.

Comparative study of animal(s) help(s) to show how man's space require are influenced in his environment. In(by) animals we can observing(observe) the direction, the rate, and the extent of changes of...

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Comparative study of animal(s) help(s) to show how man's space require are influenced in his environment. In(by) animals we can observing(observe) the direction, the rate, and the extent of changes of behavior that follow(-ing) changes in space available to them as we can never hope to do in(by) men(man). For one thing, by using animals it am(is) possible to acelerate time, since animal generations is relatively short. Scientist can, at(in) forty years, observe four hundred forty generations of mice, while has(去掉）in the same span of time seen(seeing) only two generations of his own kind. And, off (of)course, he can be more detatched about the fate of animal.

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Comparative study of animals helping to show how man's space' requirements are influenced in their environment. In animals we can observe the direction, the rate, and the extent of changes of behavior...

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Comparative study of animals helping to show how man's space' requirements are influenced in their environment. In animals we can observe the direction, the rate, and the extent of changes of behavior that follows changes in space available to them as we can never hope to do in men. For one thing, by using animals it is possible to acelerate time, since animal generations is relatively short. during forty years,science have observed four hundred forty generations of mices, while was in the same span of time seen only two generations of his own kind. of course, he can be more detatched about the fate of animal.

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