改错,Friendship is very importance.Everyone needs friendship.In all our lives we can’t live without friendship just as we can’t live without air and water.Friendship makes us getting on well with one another to go ahead under different kind of

改错,Friendship is very importance.Everyone needs friendship.In all our lives we can’t live without friendship just as we can’t live without air and water.Friendship makes us getting on well with one another to go ahead under different kind of
改错,
Friendship is very importance.Everyone needs friendship.In all our lives we can’t live without friendship just as we can’t live without air and water.Friendship makes us getting on well with one another to go ahead under different kind of difficulties in the front of us.But real friendship is no easy to come by.True friendship must be sincerely and be based on understand each other but not on benefits of each other.A good friend can always be a good teacher to us.By his advices we are persuading to go the right way.Therefore more friends we have,the better we can improve ourselves.

改错,Friendship is very importance.Everyone needs friendship.In all our lives we can’t live without friendship just as we can’t live without air and water.Friendship makes us getting on well with one another to go ahead under different kind of
1.importance变important 词性不对
2.getting 变 get make sb do结构
3.kind 变 kinds different的缘故
4.in the front of 去掉the 在..前面（加the则为在空间内部的前面,如屋子里面的前部）
5.no变not 不解释
6.sincerely 变 sincere 作表语
7.understand 变 understanding on为介词,后接名词性短语
8.advices 变 advice “”建议”不可数
9.persuading变persuaded 表被动,应用过去分词
10.more 前面加the 与后面的the better 照应形成“the+比较级 the+比较级”结构.
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like---as
getting---get
kind---kinds.
real---true.
sincerely---sincere
undrstand---understanding.
正确的
persuading---persuaded.
more前面加the
如果我能帮到您，请您及时采纳我为最佳答案吧~谢谢！importance---important.

一句一句来:
importance改为important very 修饰形容词居多
and改为or
getting改为get其实整句很中式英语Friendship makes us getting on well with one another to go ahead under different kind of difficu...

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一句一句来:
importance改为important very 修饰形容词居多
and改为or
getting改为get其实整句很中式英语Friendship makes us getting on well with one another to go ahead under different kind of difficulties in the front of us.整句可考虑写的简洁些，比如变为
friendship make us energetic , with which we can go through difficulities easily
by去掉
understand改为understanding，去掉each other（有点多余）,but..分句另起。
True friendship must be sincerely and be based on understand each other but not on benefits of each other. 也可以用not。。。but结构 genuine friendship is not based on benefits, but based on understanding
can always be有点拗口 可以直接用不用情态动词 a good friend is always ...
persuading改为被动
the more...the better....

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