帮我看看语法问题.The problem has become a focus of all society ,which hasThe problem has become a focus of all society ,which has been given the aura.However ,it ‘s easy to get job burnout if teachers don’t have right approach to deal wit

帮我看看语法问题.The problem has become a focus of all society ,which hasThe problem has become a focus of all society ,which has been given the aura.However ,it ‘s easy to get job burnout if teachers don’t have right approach to deal wit
帮我看看语法问题.The problem has become a focus of all society ,which has
The problem has become a focus of all society ,which has been given the aura.However ,it ‘s easy to get job burnout if teachers don’t have right approach to deal with .when teachers is under high pressure.Not only have they influenced teacher’s health blocking the professional development but they will influence the progress in learning and development of physical and mental health of students.It has been put forward to construct development targets of harmonious society in the report to 17th national congress of cpc.It includes not only political,culture,environment,and ecological but the inner world of harmony .it is psychological health that we often say.Caring about teacher’s psychological health and taking precautions for teacher’s job burnout.Not only concerned the teacher’s happiness ,but the development of teenagers as well.It is intolerant of ignorant and neglect.
帮我看看语法错误修过一下。

帮我看看语法问题.The problem has become a focus of all society ,which hasThe problem has become a focus of all society ,which has been given the aura.However ,it ‘s easy to get job burnout if teachers don’t have right approach to deal wit
给你提供一些参考意见,希望不算太迟.
The issue has become a focus of the whole society and has been given the aura.（aura一词似乎不妥,你是说受到关注,而非套上光环吧?不过,不知道你前文所指的问题是什么呢?所以不好修改.） However,it ‘s easy to get job burnout if teachers don’t have the right strategy to deal with the high pressure they are under.They have not only affected teachers' health,hindered their professional development,but also will affect the students' learning progress and physical and mental development.The issue has been proposed as one of the social development targets of a harmonious society in the report to 17th national congress of cpc.It addresses not only the political,culture,environment,and ecological aspects of the issue,but also the inner harmony of a person,namely one's psychological health.Caring about teacher’s psychological health and taking precautions to prevent teacher’s job burnout does not only concern the teacher’s happiness,but also the wellbeing of younger people.It can not afford to be ignored or neglected.
并不完美,仅供参考哈.