My brother who took too much time packing missed the bus.Hockey which often becomes violent is a fast-moving game.Down coats that is also very expensive are very warm.Henry who was the largest fish ever recorded in Idaho caught a trout.We laughed and

My brother who took too much time packing missed the bus.Hockey which often becomes violent is a fast-moving game.Down coats that is also very expensive are very warm.Henry who was the largest fish ever recorded in Idaho caught a trout.We laughed and
My brother who took too much time packing missed the bus.
Hockey which often becomes violent is a fast-moving game.
Down coats that is also very expensive are very warm.
Henry who was the largest fish ever recorded in Idaho caught a trout.
We laughed and looked through the yearbook which contained pictures of our school days together.

My brother who took too much time packing missed the bus.Hockey which often becomes violent is a fast-moving game.Down coats that is also very expensive are very warm.Henry who was the largest fish ever recorded in Idaho caught a trout.We laughed and
My brother who took too much time packing missed the bus.对.
Hockey which often becomes violent is a fast-moving game.对
Down coats that is (are复数)also very expensive are very warm.
down coat羽绒服
Down Coats：羽绒服
Henry who was(had) the largest fish ever recorded in Idaho caught a trout.
We laughed and looked through the yearbook which contained pictures of our school days together.对

My brother who spent too much time packing missed the bus.
Hockey which often becomes violent is a fast-moving game.
Down coats that are also very expensive are very warm.
Henry that/which...

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My brother who spent too much time packing missed the bus.
Hockey which often becomes violent is a fast-moving game.
Down coats that are also very expensive are very warm.
Henry that/which was the largest fish ever recorded in Idaho caught a trout.
We laughed and looked through the yearbook which contained pictures of our school days together.
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1 packing up。语法没错，但是没有用从句的必要，因为这句是强调因果关系，而不是强调谁，所以其实用and连接就好: My brother had taken too much time packing up and missed the bus.
2 建议把which从句放句末: Hockey is a fast-moving game, which often becomes v...

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1 packing up。语法没错，但是没有用从句的必要，因为这句是强调因果关系，而不是强调谁，所以其实用and连接就好: My brother had taken too much time packing up and missed the bus.
2 建议把which从句放句末: Hockey is a fast-moving game, which often becomes violent.
3 不懂down coats什么意思，但是你的also放的位置不对，读起来很怪，also应该放在后一个be 动词后面。ig, The coats that are very warm are also very expensive.
4 你的从句修饰错词了，按你这句的理解，Henry就是一条鱼的名字了=。=
这句应该是：Henry caught a trout, which was the largest fish ever recorded in Idaho
5 没错

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