看看这篇英语作文那些句子不太好,为考四级的练习.The Imoprtance of Keeping a Good MoodNowadays ,with the development of economy,people must face constantly work and a lot of difficulties so that live with pressure everyday. the phe

看看这篇英语作文那些句子不太好,为考四级的练习.The Imoprtance of Keeping a Good MoodNowadays ,with the development of economy,people must face constantly work and a lot of difficulties so that live with pressure everyday. the phe
看看这篇英语作文那些句子不太好,为考四级的练习.
The Imoprtance of Keeping a Good Mood
Nowadays ,with the development of economy,people must face constantly work and a lot of difficulties so that live with pressure everyday. the phenomenon that people haven't motive to do in daily life is very commom.
Moreover ,people think many ways to solve the problem. so people consider that the importance of keeping a good mood .
As far as i concerned ,keep a good mood is very important. on the one hand ,it can help
us to keep a good heathy, it's known that psychological heathy is important so keep a good mood is very important.on the other hand,it can help us to improve us work. if you have a good,you will have motive to do you r work. in our daily life,we must keep a good mood,it can make us happy everyday.and a good attitude towards life.

看看这篇英语作文那些句子不太好,为考四级的练习.The Imoprtance of Keeping a Good MoodNowadays ,with the development of economy,people must face constantly work and a lot of difficulties so that live with pressure everyday. the phe
1.people must face constantly work and a lot of difficulties so that live with pressure everyday
2.the phenomenon that people haven't motive to do in daily life is very commom.
3.As far as i concerned
4.it can help us to improve us work.
5.if you have a good
这些句子都不太好.
修改：
1.constantly 是副词,不能修饰名词 work;so-that 句型用的不对
people must face so much work and a lot of difficulties that they live with pressure everyday
2.the phenomenon that people haven no motive everyday is very commom.
3.句型用错
As far as i am concerned
4.it can help us to improve the quality of work.
5.if you have a good one
整体文章没有什么实质性的东西,只是空谈有好心情怎么怎么样,没有亮点词汇和句子.
第一段谈保持好心情的重要性（总括）.用两句就出不多.
第二段谈保持好心情具体的好处,first''''''''second''''''''''last'''''''';in addition,what is more,in my opinion,from my point of view,.
第三段谈自己的看法.in my view,however,additionally,.

八、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子 （的原因是明天考，今天抱，强记句型来得及吗？不如睡个好觉，做个好梦，求神佛保佑

要么是keeping a good mood 要么是to keep a good mood,