我用英语写的,帮忙看看有没有什么语法错误,something catchs my heart,i can't stop missing you.i know you aren't the best,but you are important for me,you gave me a lot of beautiful memories and you taught me a lot,but now i lost it,i

我用英语写的,帮忙看看有没有什么语法错误,something catchs my heart,i can't stop missing you.i know you aren't the best,but you are important for me,you gave me a lot of beautiful memories and you taught me a lot,but now i lost it,i
我用英语写的,帮忙看看有没有什么语法错误,
something catchs my heart,i can't stop missing you.i know you aren't the best,but you are important for me,you gave me a lot of beautiful memories and you taught me a lot,but now i lost it,i know it's my fults.i can't say anything about it,i think i should stay alone,all of my heart is you,the day is blue,i don't know what to do.sorry,only i can say is ‘sorry',to you and me,i want to keep you in my heart,i want to fly to the past,to touch you,to smell you,to feel you,..
i'm tired,really tired .and all i want to say is,i love you.just as you are

我用英语写的,帮忙看看有没有什么语法错误,something catchs my heart,i can't stop missing you.i know you aren't the best,but you are important for me,you gave me a lot of beautiful memories and you taught me a lot,but now i lost it,i
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something catches my heart
and you taught me a lot, but now i lost them (you)
i think i should stay alone, you occupied my heart completely

I couldn't stop missing you as something catches my heart. Althought you are not the best, you are the most important for me. You left me substantial beartiful memories and taught me a lot before, how...

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I couldn't stop missing you as something catches my heart. Althought you are not the best, you are the most important for me. You left me substantial beartiful memories and taught me a lot before, however I lost them. I know it is my fault and I cannot say anything about it. Now I think I had better stay alone since all what in my heart is you. My day is blue. Is there anything could to do? No, absolutely not. I am sorry that what I can say now is just "sorry", to you and me. I wish I could back to the past, touching you, kissing you and feeling what you felt.
So tired I am now, so tired. all what I want to say is that I loved you, I am loving, I will love you forever, honey.
兄弟，我尽所能的帮你了，不想改变你的原有意思，但是纠正了你的语法错误。是情书还是道歉信啊？ 呵呵，good luck~

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