作业帮帮看下有米有病句!(英文那个啥米滴)有些米学过,乱写滴My HobbiesI have some hobbies.Collecting stamps,singing and playing computer games.i have some stamps.My favorite stamps are some stamps about the 2008 olympic games.I like it v
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帮看下有米有病句!(英文那个啥米滴)有些米学过,乱写滴My HobbiesI have some hobbies.Collecting stamps,singing and playing computer games.i have some stamps.My favorite stamps are some stamps about the 2008 olympic games.I like it v
帮看下有米有病句!(英文那个啥米滴)
有些米学过,乱写滴
My Hobbies
I have some hobbies.Collecting stamps,singing and playing computer games.
i have some stamps.My favorite stamps are some stamps about the 2008 olympic games.I like it very much.They are very nice.
And singing is my hobby ,too.when I happy or sad ,I like singing.Singing makesme happy.
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再给藕歌结尾.
总觉得跟哪个题目还有些距离,看看哪还能加些?
要在班上念,
还有会不会太短了点
上面有个错的点
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i like them very much
帮看下有米有病句!(英文那个啥米滴)有些米学过,乱写滴My HobbiesI have some hobbies.Collecting stamps,singing and playing computer games.i have some stamps.My favorite stamps are some stamps about the 2008 olympic games.I like it v
My Hobbies
I have some(最好改成many) hobbies.(最好加上such as)Collecting stamps,singing and playing computer games.
i have some stamps.My favorite stamps are some stamps about the 2008 olympic games.I like it(应改成them) very much.They are very nice.
And（最好去掉and） singing is my hobby ,too.when I(加上am) happy or sad ,I like singing.Singing makesme happy.
(修改仅从语法角度,建议你再写得有文采一点,这样才能的高分啊.)
结尾：What are your hobbies?Come on!Tell me.