SAT OC语法题By including pieces of cloth,newspaper,wallpaper,and other materials in his work,Picasso’s innovation had an important influence on twentieth-century art.(A) Picasso’s innovation had an important influence on(B) this innovation of

SAT OC语法题By including pieces of cloth,newspaper,wallpaper,and other materials in his work,Picasso’s innovation had an important influence on twentieth-century art.(A) Picasso’s innovation had an important influence on(B) this innovation of
SAT OC语法题
By including pieces of cloth,newspaper,wallpaper,and other materials in his work,
Picasso’s innovation had an important influence on twentieth-century art.
(A) Picasso’s innovation had an important influence on
(B) this innovation of Picasso’s was important in its influence over
(C) Picasso’s important innovative influence was on
(D) Picasso was influential,with his innovation,over
(E) the innovative Picasso was an important influence on
但是我不太理解D为什么不对
Explanation for Incorrect Answer D :
Choice (D) exhibits awkward phrasing.It is strange to say that Picasso was
"influential,with his innovation,over twentieth-century art."
那请问这句话的语法有没有错啊...假如没有E的话能选D吗.

SAT OC语法题By including pieces of cloth,newspaper,wallpaper,and other materials in his work,Picasso’s innovation had an important influence on twentieth-century art.(A) Picasso’s innovation had an important influence on(B) this innovation of
要改成 picasso,with his innovation,was influential over

好吧，我学艺不精，现在才发现，错的地方是be influential in 而不是over

D意思变了吧。。。innovation在原句是做主要成分，D变成了次要的插入语，意思变了。
而且OVER 20TH CENTURY ART 很奇怪啊。。。over 20th century才比较舒服吧。。。毕加索也不能和20世纪的艺术作为包含关系啊意思应该没变... 而且SAT不是一只都有奇怪的答案吗...

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D意思变了吧。。。innovation在原句是做主要成分，D变成了次要的插入语，意思变了。
而且OVER 20TH CENTURY ART 很奇怪啊。。。over 20th century才比较舒服吧。。。毕加索也不能和20世纪的艺术作为包含关系啊

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