帮忙修改一下这几句英文句子 保证语法正确In June 2006,Xue released his first album .It broke out nation wide soon.\x0bAfter the first degree success,Xue released albums , and ,which enhanced his honor be music grace charming.\x0bIn J

帮忙修改一下这几句英文句子 保证语法正确In June 2006,Xue released his first album .It broke out nation wide soon.\x0bAfter the first degree success,Xue released albums , and ,which enhanced his honor be music grace charming.\x0bIn J
帮忙修改一下这几句英文句子 保证语法正确
In June 2006,Xue released his first album .It broke out nation wide soon.\x0bAfter the first degree success,Xue released albums , and ,which enhanced his honor be music grace charming.\x0b
In Jacky’s personal during the concert.\x0bHe told the fans:" If not for you,I am worthless."

帮忙修改一下这几句英文句子 保证语法正确In June 2006,Xue released his first album .It broke out nation wide soon.\x0bAfter the first degree success,Xue released albums , and ,which enhanced his honor be music grace charming.\x0bIn J
In June 2006,Xue released his first album .It soon broke out through nation wide .\x0bAfter the first degree's success,Xue released albums , and ,which enhanced his honor being music grace charming.\x0b
In Jacky’s personal time during the concert.\x0bHe told the fans:" If it were not for you,I am worthless."

broke out nation wide是想说走向世界吗？如果是可以改成it is going global soon。
要说在全国暴红。可改成，it became popular in the country。
the 1st degree sucess是什么意思？第一次成功？我可能会这么写after his first success，
which enhanced ...

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broke out nation wide是想说走向世界吗？如果是可以改成it is going global soon。
要说在全国暴红。可改成，it became popular in the country。
the 1st degree sucess是什么意思？第一次成功？我可能会这么写after his first success，
which enhanced his honor be music grace charming意思是这些增进了他在音乐魅力上的声誉吗?如果是，可以改成which made his music more charming and famous。这些让他的音乐更有魅力和知名。
in Jacky’s personal during the concert。在他个人演唱会上，in the solo concert。
最后 If not for you, I am worthless."如果没有你们，我毫无价值。with you，i am worthless。

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In June, 2006, Xue released his first album "Xue ZhiQian". It soon becoming popular in the country, for the first time after the success, Xue has released album , ...

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In June, 2006, Xue released his first album "Xue ZhiQian". It soon becoming popular in the country, for the first time after the success, Xue has released album , and , music earned him a high honor.
In Jacky personal in concert, he told fans: "Without you, I am worthless."

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