改错yesterday,i went to have lunch in a restauranyesterday,i went to have lunch in a restauran ,the restaurant was such crowded that the food arrived lateand ehe dish was cold ,i was on a hurry,so i sarted eating the food any way.several minutelate

改错yesterday,i went to have lunch in a restauranyesterday,i went to have lunch in a restauran ,the restaurant was such crowded that the food arrived lateand ehe dish was cold ,i was on a hurry,so i sarted eating the food any way.several minutelate
改错yesterday,i went to have lunch in a restauran
yesterday,i went to have lunch in a restauran ,the restaurant was such crowded that the food arrived lateand ehe dish was cold ,i was on a hurry,so i sarted eating the food any way.several minutelater,server came wo me and was asked hhow i liked the meal.in that situation,he may choos wo sy honestly that yo are disappointing that the food came out ,however,i choose not wo tell the truth.with a simle on my face,i tol the sever nothing satisfied me.i told lie.but it made the sever happily.
大小写我忽略了,应该是十处.

改错yesterday,i went to have lunch in a restauranyesterday,i went to have lunch in a restauran ,the restaurant was such crowded that the food arrived lateand ehe dish was cold ,i was on a hurry,so i sarted eating the food any way.several minutelate
restauran拼错,后面还有个t
还有好多地方呢,语句不通,看不懂~

yesterday,i went to have lunch in a restauran(restaurant) ,the restaurant was such(so) crowded that the food arrived late and the dish was cold ,i was on(in) a hurry, so i started eating the food any ...

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yesterday,i went to have lunch in a restauran(restaurant) ,the restaurant was such(so) crowded that the food arrived late and the dish was cold ,i was on(in) a hurry, so i started eating the food any way(anyway). several minute(minutes) later, (the) server came to me and (was)删除 asked how i liked the meal. in that situation,he(I) may choose to say honestly that you are(I was)
disappointing(dispoingted) that(with) the food came out ,however, i choose(chose) not to tell the truth.with a simle on my face, i told the server nothing satisfied(dissatisfied) me. i told (a) lie. but it made the sever happily(happy).
括号里的是我改正的，并且我把你原来文章里的很多拼写错误都改了。你先看看吧。

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